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I have voted but tell me, what is an unholy desire?

thanks....

Gave you a 9.

candygirl wrote:

thanks....

CG, maybe my mind is in the gutter oh , but whetin wah on your mind when you wrote dis ollor one heah? : .

Mai wrote:

candygirl wrote:

thanks....

CG, maybe my mind is in the gutter oh , but whetin wah on your mind when you wrote dis ollor one heah? : .

candygirl wrote:

Mai wrote:

candygirl wrote:

thanks....

CG, maybe my mind is in the gutter oh , but whetin wah on your mind when you wrote dis ollor one heah? : .

married woman's wild imagination. . i gave you a 10.

Got a 9 from me.

Candy girl

You are my world

Look so sweet

You're a special treat



Candy girl

All i want to say

When you're with me

You brighten up my day

All I know

When I'm with you

You make me feel so good

through and through

The way you walk

and the way you talk

You always look so good

You make me forget my thoughts



Do you really love me?

Don't you really care?

Do you really need me?

And will you always be there?

you M. Jackson now?

Sounds like talent show song from Liberia in 1984.

candygirl wrote:

you M. Jackson now?

Nope...but I think Im the reason for you unholy desires

Traveller wrote:

Sounds like talent show song from Liberia in 1984.

T you resemble one of those pekins from Disco Drink ... da you? :

jclifden wrote:

candygirl wrote:

you M. Jackson now?

Nope...but I think Im the reason for you unholy desires

ehn? and why you think so? :

candygirl wrote:

jclifden wrote:

candygirl wrote:

you M. Jackson now?

Nope...but I think Im the reason for you unholy desires

ehn? and why you think so? :

Dont make me bussor ur secret here oh...

jclifden wrote:

candygirl wrote:

jclifden wrote:

candygirl wrote:

you M. Jackson now?

Nope...but I think Im the reason for you unholy desires

ehn? and why you think so? :

Dont make me bussor ur secret here oh...

hahaha... bussor t lemme hear some too :

No New Year's Day to celebrate

No chocolate covered candy hearts to give away

No first of spring

No song to sing

In fact here's just another ordinary day



No April rain

No flowers bloom

No wedding Saturday within the month of June

But what it is, is something true

Made up of these three words that I must say to you



I just called to say I love you

I just called to say how much I care

I just called to say I love you

And I mean it from the bottom of my heart



No summer's high

No warm July

No harvest moon to light one tender August night

No autumn breeze

No falling leaves

Not even time for birds to fly to southern skies



No Libra sun

No Halloween

No giving thanks to all the Christmas joy you bring

But what it is, though old so new

To fill your heart like no three words could ever do



I just called to say I love you

I just called to say how much I care, I do

I just called to say I love you

And I mean it from the bottom of my heart



I just called to say I love you

I just called to say how much I care, I do

I just called to say I love you

And I mean it from the bottom of my heart, of my heart,

of my heart



I just called to say I love you

I just called to say how much I care, I do

I just called to say I love you

And I mean it from the bottom of my heart, of my heart,

baby of my heart

aye yah.. dis boy really in love oh...
so.. who's the lucky girl?

done

candygirl wrote:

aye yah.. dis boy really in love oh...
so.. who's the lucky girl?

LOL......

thanks to all who have voted ya.. when i get my $25 i will tell yoru thank you plenty. hahahaha

jclifden wrote:

candygirl wrote:

aye yah.. dis boy really in love oh...
so.. who's the lucky girl?

LOL......

cat got your tongue? :

candygirl wrote:

jclifden wrote:

candygirl wrote:

aye yah.. dis boy really in love oh...
so.. who's the lucky girl?

LOL......

cat got your tongue? :

it depends...which cat are u referring to :

jclifden wrote:

candygirl wrote:

jclifden wrote:

candygirl wrote:

aye yah.. dis boy really in love oh...
so.. who's the lucky girl?

LOL......

cat got your tongue? :

it depends...which cat are u referring to :

the one you know i referring to

I have voted. Interesting poem. Keep up the good work my dear. I know my friend and the little man in Monrovia is proud of UUUUUUUUUU